Nono don’t go yet! Your weekly streak was doing so well!
In seriousness, this is a really nice way to end the year, your most prolific yet. I love the harmonies here, I feel like they contrast the high pitched melody really well.
Nono don’t go yet! Your weekly streak was doing so well!
In seriousness, this is a really nice way to end the year, your most prolific yet. I love the harmonies here, I feel like they contrast the high pitched melody really well.
haha, thank you for the kind words as always!
Completely fair to remove the ugly dubstep sound that happened in the original around 1:25. Hearing the intro with lyrics fits way better than I expected to be honest, although I feel like the drops suffer a little because the mixing rewinds itself back to 2015. Anyway good job!
iPad mini 5? Hey, that’s what I use to make all my music.
This is one of the most interesting of your songs. Of them all, I feel like this tells the most complete story. I would have to knack the percussion for being a very basic rhythm for most of it, and also being used in two sections. I’m not sure how to export with audacity via FL mobile (something I thought was impossible but you say otherwise), can you just upload it as a file into audacity and call it there with no sacrifice to volume? I’ve had to work around that issue for as long as I’ve used FL mobile by increasing the volume of the entire track manually JUST enough to not be distorted, but it results in a quieter track, though not as quiet as if I used the “normalize level” feature when exporting as an mp3. Anyway, enough about that, the melody is nice and somehow seems less repetitive than your other music, good job on this one.
You can export the file to MP3/WAV using FLSM3, then transfer the file using iTunes... which is a big hassle and annoying but it's a heck of a lot better than waiting for the cloud to update and downloading the track from there.
Oh for the record I never touch normalize level, the drawback of how much volume you lose when you use it far outweighs the benefit of not having a single clipping of audio. Usually just having a limiter at the very end of the effects is enough to catch most clipping, and those that get past aren't significant enough to ruin the song.
What I used to do on audacity was import the song, increase the volume until it clips a reasonable amount, then just soft limit it and call it a day. No one noticed, and everyone was (hopefully) happy.
Scouted, this isn’t bad, also very unique music for Newgrounds.
Thanks you so much <3
I will try to make better music
So this is the same song as Summertime, as far as I can tell. You’ve changed the name and I think a few sections, but the main issues with the original seem to carry over here of course. I think the main issue with the melody is the fact that the rhythm is just 3 16ths over and over for 8 bars with little to no variation on that throughout the song. It’s a little hard to explain, but it basically makes it feel run-on and therefore less catchy. I have been a victim of this myself, specifically with my song Maryland that falls into this same trap. Still great mixing and progression though so you retain the rating.
Upon relistening, I see you’ve added the thing where the pitch decreases. More importantly though, you’ve added another harmony. It’s subtle, but it’s definitely there, and it nearly completely fixes the issue. Combined with the new percussion that brings a lot of originality to the song, the listener now doesn’t have to focus on the melody the whole time, and they can enjoy the song more especially upon their second or third listen. You’ve earned another star in my books, for what they’re worth.
Thanks for the feedback! Fixed it up!
Scouted. Probably one of the most tragic topics to make a rock song out of, and have you seen a picture of Marshall applewhite? He looks just about as insane as his philosophy.
Wow thanks! I watched all their recruitment material and the "exit" tape before writing this, and yeah, he had the crazy eyes. Hard to believe a guy like that could convince people to follow him, but that's the lesson here I guess.
this is still my favorite waterflame song
Not needed
i love the buildup but it doesnt fully make up for the lackluster drops. but i REALLY love the first buildup so take your 4.5/5
Upon reading your message in the description I suddenly respect you a lot less…
Classical and occasionally electronic composer who also made a song for every state once.
Age 19, Male
Pre-med student
Wayne State University
Detroit, MI
Joined on 11/26/20