Nice rhythm, nice beats, a little too few instruments for my taste but I guess this is supposed to be 8-bit, overall well done!
Nice rhythm, nice beats, a little too few instruments for my taste but I guess this is supposed to be 8-bit, overall well done!
Atmospheric. Love everything before the “emotional height” when mixing begins to falter. Instruments are good up until that point as well. Really nice progression, but could use more of a theme. Overall, good job!
Thanks for the feedback
“You were on the verge of greatness, you were THIS close!”
The beat is the best part of the song by far. The melody could use some variety and the instruments aren’t super amazing. The song lacks a drop, as a dubstep song it should include dubstep somewhere lol. Good job though
What gender do you think it is?
Well done
The structure of the song is actually pretty decent. However it ends suddenly. The instruments themselves are good, what’s not so good is the melody. The melody is missing *something*, I’m not sure but it doesn’t feel as jumpy as it should.... I’m not making any sense am I. But definitely make a sequel to this or a VIP because it has a lot of potential to be great.
Ok thank you alot I will take all this into consideration for my next release/remake :)
This is a song that exists
End my existence
The first half is far better than the second; I wish it had more of a climax. Instruments were good until the second half. Really liking the bass and rhythm. If you try this again, make it longer and add a sense of progression that has more emotional tension; granted this is a dance track so take that as you may.
maybe i can do more :3
thank dude :3
“I don’t know if I’m happy with the result”
-me a few months ago
-me now: this is one of the best Missouri’s by far. Missouri 1 is basic and not much is going for it, but a decent start. Missouri 3 is just flat out weird. Missouri 4 is a dance track and can’t really be grouped in with the other three. This song, however, is one of the best I’ve ever made, barring a few note mistakes and missed opportunities. I don’t normally say stuff like this because it makes me seem like a narcissist but I think it’s ok to take at least some degree of pride in songs you’re proud of: this is one of them.
Edit: not anymore lol
The song that started it all. Let’s just appreciate that this song spawned 2 accounts and 4 sequels. Yes I am the same guy as Albin, but my old account known as DustifiedGD actually saw some decent success in getting hundreds of listens per song and I want those days back again. Please hear the superior sequels to this.
Classical and occasionally electronic composer who also made a song for every state once.
Age 19, Male
Pre-med student
Wayne State University
Detroit, MI
Joined on 11/26/20