Atmospheric. Love everything before the “emotional height” when mixing begins to falter. Instruments are good up until that point as well. Really nice progression, but could use more of a theme. Overall, good job!
Atmospheric. Love everything before the “emotional height” when mixing begins to falter. Instruments are good up until that point as well. Really nice progression, but could use more of a theme. Overall, good job!
Thanks for the feedback
“You were on the verge of greatness, you were THIS close!”
The beat is the best part of the song by far. The melody could use some variety and the instruments aren’t super amazing. The song lacks a drop, as a dubstep song it should include dubstep somewhere lol. Good job though
What gender do you think it is?
The structure of the song is actually pretty decent. However it ends suddenly. The instruments themselves are good, what’s not so good is the melody. The melody is missing *something*, I’m not sure but it doesn’t feel as jumpy as it should.... I’m not making any sense am I. But definitely make a sequel to this or a VIP because it has a lot of potential to be great.
Ok thank you alot I will take all this into consideration for my next release/remake :)
The first half is far better than the second; I wish it had more of a climax. Instruments were good until the second half. Really liking the bass and rhythm. If you try this again, make it longer and add a sense of progression that has more emotional tension; granted this is a dance track so take that as you may.
maybe i can do more :3
thank dude :3
Classical and occasionally electronic composer who also made a song for every state once.
Age 19, Male
Pre-med student
Wayne State University
Detroit, MI
Joined on 11/26/20